Poem 74: From the top of the hill on Good Friday

(This poem continues my decision this month to post poems I wrote fifty plus years ago – this week’s poem was written around about when I was 17.)

The hills cringed green, blood-green.
They were thorn-throbbed, twisted; silent down a
Crumpled valley, torn green to the sea
Where two ships lay silvered and
Waiting for another. And on,
On where the ocean turned with the sky
Clouds jarred to royal purple with the mountains.
The air too choked thin and weak as the
Sun sank crippled at three o’clock.

Is there something here which does not pass?
Answer!
Is there something here which does not pass?
Is there nothing still?

I went down the hill and
Wrote what past I had before it fled.

7 thoughts on “Poem 74: From the top of the hill on Good Friday

  1. umashankar

    The imagery is overwhelmingly visual and intense. I must say, it stopped me in places forcing me think, reflect, and reconcile. The poem hints at a troubled internal landscape of someone who has discovered the disappointments of existence recently.

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