This is the second poem for the year. The form of this poem and tomorrow’s as well is from France and called a Kyrielle.)
These carriers of teeming life,
How quiet the ribboned waters go
Then tumble rocks in jagged strife.
Yet still the mighty rivers flow.
Farmers milk their herds of cows;
They moo, and eat, and fart, and low;
And all the shit escapes somehow,
Yet still the mighty rivers flow.
Factories on the river side
Exude their waste, no fuss or show.
Dead fish no longer need to hide,
Yet still the mighty rivers flow.
The farmers’ farms have said goodbye.
Factories closed: financial woe.
All is dead and withered dry
Yet still the mighty rivers flow.
To hear the poem read aloud click HERE.
This is such a telling poem on the plight and magnanimousness of the rivers. It is also an apt commentary on the times. In that sense, you have mated the beauty of the ancient poetic style with the misdemeanours of the humans and the consequences thereof with great effect.
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Thanks Uma. I rather like the form – and it seems quite uncomplicated.
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We are insignificant but nature will be here when we are gone…even though we try our best to kill it…
I do like the style…
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Thanks Max. You’re turning into a regular poetry addict!! Yes, I like the style of this sort of poem.
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This style flows well and is easier to understand. I regret not reading more when I was younger. I guess I’ll make up for it now.
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A lyrical musing on how small we are in relation to the longer life of the land.
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Thanks Andrea. A good summation!
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It makes me think of Hercules rerouting the river so it would clean out the stable.
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My youth would have appreciated a river to be diverted through the milking shed and yard! Twice a day!
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Haha!
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