Every morning I go to the café to get a latte and hopefully to catch a glimpse of her. Her name I believe is Claudia. She seems lovely. She is one of three baristas that work behind the counter but the café is so popular that you can’t guarantee that you’ll be served by Claudia. In fact I’ve only struck her twice. But she is there behind the counter being pleasant to everyone and looking enchanting. I’m sure she notices me. Sometimes she nods a greeting in my direction.
Next time I get her in the café line I’m going to be really daring and ask if she wants to go to the movies or something. She can only say no. I’ve never had much luck at dating but I’m not giving up yet. She can’t say yes if she’s not asked.
I try to be positive about things but so often rejection seems to be the name of the game. You can tell that most women I ask for a date are not too keen to go out with a guy in a wheelchair.
I say do it. It’s better to know than to always wonder. Fingers crossed for the best! Rock strong!
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Thank you!
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Baristas! Pah! Heads in the steam clouds!
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I had to look up the spelling of barista when I wrote it – so I’m not too familiar with coffee houses/cafes…!
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In Australia, a barista could be someone who represents you in court, as opposed to a solicitor.
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Most baristas start the day with a coffee before going to court.
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There’s worse things in the world than wheels, Claudia.
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I know, but I’m not telling her.
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You sound like a nice guy. Some girls care more about that.
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Thanks. I always play it nice when I plan a serial killing.
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It is a nice story with a muted anti-climatic revelation casually tossed at the end.
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Subtlety is perhaps not my strong point.
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The casualness is not as innocuous as it may appear.
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Do it! Do it! I say. You might be surprised!
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Fiction is full of surprises!
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Naturally!
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I hope for a happy ending….
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Try and be a bit more negative Andrea. You always seek a happy ending!
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And yet I always prefer tragedy!
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Ha! What is a murder if not done in a beautiful setting!
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I have a good feeling about Claudia. I think she’s going to say yes.
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She’ll probably tell him to jump in the lake and eat with her coffee one of the buns she bought at the bakery yesterday.
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The ending is quite tragic. I doubt a cute barista will say yes. I certainly didn’t expect the wheelchair ending. I thought the whole thing was narrated from the POV of an incel (before the twist at the end) for some strange reason.
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I had to look up incel!! So wouldn’t have written with one in mind – until now!
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Looking forward to a story from a bitter, misogynistic incel’s POV!
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