By the time I reached the station the train had gone. I had been going out with Dolores for almost three years. In fact I was about to pop the question. I was planning how best to do it when she announced it was all over.
“It’s over,” she said. “I’m eloping with Patrick.”
I couldn’t believe it. I went outside and stood there looking at nothing. Eloping with Patrick? Eloping with Patrick?
I saw Dolores leave the house and head for the train station. Someone said she and Patrick were heading into the distant blue. I was at a complete loss. After half an hour or so I thought I’d race to the station and plead with her to give me another chance. But the train had gone.
I don’t think I will ever forgive my brother.
Aw, man, betrayed by your very own brother. What a bummer! Guess that makes him Cain?
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If he’s Abel to do it!
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She obviously didn’t deserve him.
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Or her. (You sneaky Bruce)
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Sneaky seems to creep up all oblivious-like.
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Do you claim ignorance? Do I give you too much credit? 🙂
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Far too much credit but I’ll take it – humbly.
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Patrick saved you a lot of trouble.
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Such a wise head on such young shoulders, Max.
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You taught me everything I know.
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One certainly can’t be one’s brother’s keeper, nor can be one one’s lover’s either.
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I do hope that is not the voice of experience Uma!
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I always knew that Patrick was up to no good.
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He was not to be trusted since the day he was born.
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Never a train crash when you need one…
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Their plans to elope would be derailed.
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Ha, ha! Excellent response!
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I don’t see what forgiving your brother has to do with Dolores and Patrick – was he driving the train?
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I will never forgive my brother because he once told my teacher that I cheated at maths. Duh.
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Oh brother.
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How did you know I have a Brother printer that’s playing up?
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I have my ways.
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Never trust anyone named Patrick. I misread brother for mother at first and had a moment’s pause at what I might have missed, then went back to read the sentence again. Whew.
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Brothers and Mothers are easily confusable!
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