One critic wrote “Left me wanting more.” It is open to interpretation whether he meant more of the story, more tomatoes or something else entirely. He also observed “I can’t see this becoming a TV series”.
Questions of causation. Post hoc ergo propter hoc? You’ve got us jumping to a lot of un-evidenced conclusions here which is very much in the spirit of our times.
Send my best to Jodie-Lee’s family. Our thoughts are with them at this sad time.
Weave a Web 
Not bad, but kinda wordy.
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I agree. Such things happen when one doesn’t have an editor.
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Well this one is open to interpretation.
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You could write an entire treatise perhaps on the interpretation Max.
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Bruce I will leave the writing to you… I don’t have a flair for the dramatic or darkness as you do.
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Never trust academia.
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Ever since they claimed the earth was round I have sneered at academia.
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Ridiculous.
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Rid Iculous of what?
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Wartz.
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One critic wrote “Left me wanting more.” It is open to interpretation whether he meant more of the story, more tomatoes or something else entirely. He also observed “I can’t see this becoming a TV series”.
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I would imagine that the critic would want MORE murders. Once these critics get a taste of blood there’s no mercy.
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A true paragon of brevity.
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The soul of wit. Thank you!
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In the end Jodie-Lee was cured of the worst disease one could have: being alive. The prognosis is a 100% mortality.
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I agree – once again. Death comes quicker than one imagines.
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Questions of causation. Post hoc ergo propter hoc? You’ve got us jumping to a lot of un-evidenced conclusions here which is very much in the spirit of our times.
Send my best to Jodie-Lee’s family. Our thoughts are with them at this sad time.
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It was what the prof was injecting the tomatoes with.
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People with such suspicious minds should be forced to eat the tomatoes to have proven to them that the tomatoes have not been injected.
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lol. Perhaps I should retract my statement.
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Could you make it shorter? Sort of boringly long!
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Verbosity has always been my downfall.
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Bravo, I’m far too wordy to tell such an effective story in so few words!
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Oh – but you have the gift of the gab!
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