(The closing sentence for this story was suggested by Chris Nelson of chrisnelson61. If you want to join in the fun of suggesting a future closing sentence for these stories, click here for a peek as to what’s what. Try not to read the closing sentence until you’ve read the story!)
Raymond had three children, two boys and a girl. He was immensely proud of his two sons. They had done so well at school, especially on the sports field. Now that they were old enough to leave school they were as keen as mustard to get jobs. In fact, Jared had already been accepted for a job on the railways.
The daughter, Annette, was another kettle of fish altogether. She was a book worm. “Get your head out of those books and start doing something useful. Reading books won’t earn you money.” It was Raymond’s favourite axe to grind.
“That lazy girl is not going to go far living in fantasyland in her books. This morning I had to physically force her to slam the book shut and start peeling the potatoes for tonight’s dinner. We’ve got a house to run.”
And indeed, Annette had been engrossed in the book. She had only a few pages to go. Ellen, the narrator, had moved to Wuthering Heights soon after Lockwood had left to replace the housekeeper who had departed. In March, Hareton had had an accident and been confined to the farmhouse. During this time, a friendship had developed between Cathy and Hareton. This continues into April when Heathcliff begins to act very strangely, seeing visions of Catherine. After not eating for four days, he is…
Annette left her novel to peel the potatoes. Why was her father so demanding; almost to the point of cruelity? Why couldn’t he let her finish when she was almost at the end?
After half an hour of dinner preparation, Annette returned to her novel. Only then did she notice that the last page was missing.
A cruel twist Bruce. But so expertly written.
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Thanks Nitin. I think I may have missed something – what’s with all the repostings on your site?
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Huge problem Bruce! I installed some plugins and now I’m spamming the place I think. It’s irritating. I tried taking down posts and putting them up again, but my site is reposting everything.
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Some gremlin must think your worth disseminating.
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I hate those furry things!
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Sometimes they dangle a carrot in front of you only to stick it up your bum.
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Lol now that would make for a great starting line for a story!
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!! Now there’s an idea! Your suggested opening line’s story is scheduled to make an appearance on Saturday 20th July – although it’s not written yet.
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😂 Lol
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Mean! haha
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Yes! Isn’t it fun!!
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Very clever use of the suggested last line, BA.
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Thank you, Yvonne.
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The inclusion of the last sentence is as seamless as it can get. The story itself is a masterstroke.
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Thank you, Uma! I almost can’t fit my enlarged head through the hole of my pullover!
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More the need to disgorge the stories that have been pooling up in there.
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!!!
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Superb build up to this, Bruce – I was so engrossed I couldn’t remember the closing line!
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That’s praise indeed! Thanks Chris!
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Ooh that hurt.
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There’s no hurt that a band aid can’t fix!
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So cruel of her father. But she can use her imagination!
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I think it was Dickens, in “Great Expectations” who had to write a happy ending because of the outcry over the sad ending! Now that’s a challenge!
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I’m so upset on Annette’s behalf!
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Can I offer you a tissue to dab your eyes?…
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