(The opening sentence for this story was suggested by Chris of chrisnelson61. If you want to join in the fun of suggesting a future opening sentence for these stories, click here for a peek as to what’s what.)
The opening line was always the most difficult to write. He’d written openings many times before, but this time it seemed doubly important. It was as if people’s lives depended on it. Certainly his life depended on it, especially his career. I suppose having a career is like having a life.
Strangely, he was in a train when the opening line struck him. He’d spent days on his opening line. He’d changed it dozens of times, rarely on paper but mainly in his head. Once the opening was decided upon, all else would follow. But he had writer’s block. What was he to do? And then WHAM! it came to him while on a train.
Abraham stepped forward.
Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
Superb, Bruce. Absolutely love it!
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Thanks Chris! That is a thrill!
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The quiet of the opening line hints at a storm waiting in the wings. Elegant, as ever!
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Thank you – I was going to take the opening sentence of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice and do 20 or 30 scribbled out 1st sentence attempts.
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Superb stuff
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Thanks Alex
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