Andrew lived with his grandma in a little cottage. He helped his grandma grow vegetables and flowers. He also helped his grandma milk the cow. The cow lived in the shed out the back.
A big snowstorm came. Andrew was sad because the weather reminded him of the day his mother died. Grandma said that if he looked into the frosty night sky he would see lots of stars brightly shining. Perhaps his mother was looking down.
Andrew made a great big star out of silver foil and hung it in the window so his mother would know where to look.
A little later Grandma was busy making cinnamon cookies in the kitchen. There was a knock at the door.
“I’ll get it, Grandma.”
Andrew opened the door. The winter wind swept in.
There stood Three Kings. What a glorious sight! They were dressed in cloth of gold studded with jewels. They wore crowns and had rings galore on their fingers. They carried gold, frankincense, and myrrh.
“We have been following a star,” they said. “We saw the star in your window and wondered if this was the right place.”
Andrew said he didn’t think it was the right place, but there were some people in the shed out the back sheltering from the snow. They might know something about it.
“I’ll take you there.”
And that is how Andrew changed the history of the world.
I thought you were going to shift this into a “ Breaking Bad” story line, what with an unexpected knock on the door and men bearing chemical elements. But I digress…
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You know I wouldn’t do that, Eric. I’m too soft-hearted. Aren’t we all!
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No, not you Bruce. Yet we know some of your stories have a knack for going twisty. 🤭
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I’ve learnt from experience not to trick the beloved reader!
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Trick away!
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Oooh, you can go: 1499B, 1499C, 1499D … 1499Z. Then, 1499A.1, 1499A.2, etc. Your work is not yet done, mate.
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Such numbering looks untidy in the Index.
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Don’t worry about the silly index and archives. Worry about your silly readers. (Darn, I can’t do an overstrike on that adjective and then add “highly intelligent”) Failed again.
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That is such a fertile closing line. Apparently, it’s an ‘A’ rated story.
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I am now going to have 1501 stories. The symmetry of life is ruined…
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A Good Man believes in rounding up the affairs.
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“There are some people in the barn sheltering…” I like this. It does remind me of the Montanist heresy, though.
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I can see why that could be deduced – but Montanus never claimed to be writing fiction!
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Didn’t he claim that each generation had the opportunity to reject or claim Christ–meaning there was a new one each generation. So, this story was a bit modern–well, more so than 1st Century, and that’s what made me think of it, what with the people in the barn…
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Well to be honest I don’t know much about Montanists – although I do know a fair bit about the infancy narrative in Matthew’s and Luke’s Gospels. They’re both gigantic masterpieces in a literary form (midrash) that we simply don’t have in our Western Society.
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Such a great responsibility for such an unassuming lad….oh well, you’ve done it now, you’ll have to go to 1600!
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Well, thank you Andrea. 1600? In your dreams! I shall continue to read your postings with wonder and admiration!!
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Great story, Bruce, with a surprise ending!!
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Thanks, Noelle.
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Well I think you’re a star too. Also, this cartoon
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Merry Christmas, Bruce, and a blessed New Year!
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Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too!
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Thank you!
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