How long the shadows fall
this breakfast time. How tall in height,
(as if in evening light)
the fence posts stand, as might night guards,
freezing in sun’s weak shards.
A bitter morning. Hardened ice.
Desolate wind with vice
-like grip, ready to slice the heart.
For me to light the fire
is to admit that you’re not here.
The early morning’s cheer-
ful warmth that only yesterday
you lit, your final day,
before the Fates held sway and snipped
your thread of life, and clipped
forever what bound you to me.
How long the shadows fall
this first breakfast time.
Listen to the poem read aloud HERE!
Bruce this made me stop breathing! Beautiful….
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Thanks, Shubha
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I agree with Shubha here. This innocuous little poem that glides with the ease of a swan halted the march of time. It reminded me of Cynthia Jobin’s saddest poems.
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Oh thank you, Uma. That is praise and encouragement indeed!
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Thanks Uma Shankar, yes I thought of Cynthia too, she would have said something in her unique way. On another note – Waiting for something from you! It’s been a while…..
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Thanks. I’ll be back.
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This is a beautiful poem.
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Thank you very much.
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Very moving Bruce, some beautiful imagery and a great sense of sadness.
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Thanks Andrea – I think I’m in love with this poetic form. Maybe I’ve changed it from the Vietnamese Luc Bat form but I find it compelling.
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