Now that summer’s over
I’m a season older, and find
each summer season mines
less memories. It’s kind of sad
to think of times we had.
The heat-strewn days were glad when we
were children; so carefree,
chasing bees, climbing trees – the days
all melded in a haze
of ever-sunshine glaze. And yet…
It’s easy to forget
age casts far wider nets to catch
a varied vaster batch
of joys than those dispatched to girls
and boys. For in life’s twirl
of memory there swirls wise dreams
far deeper, so it seems,
than younger days we deem as fine.
Here, in my autumn time,
(I thank this God of mine) there calls
no need to live it all again.
Listen to the poem read aloud HERE!
(Based on the Vietnamese luc bat poetic form. For those who don’t know, I usually challenge myself with a weekly poem using a set poetic form each month).
Simply beautiful Bruce. Today is 23 degrees in Sydney, just gorgeous
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We have a southerly coming through – so the fire is going!
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The lyricisim and innate rhyming of the poem made me read it again and again. The poem’s brooding span over life is breathtaking. Poetry can’t be anything less than second nature to you.
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Thanks, Uma. I think the “luc bat” form might be the one I most fall for!
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This is lovely.
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Thanks, Nanette. Much appreciated!
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What a wonderful commentary in beautiful words. It made me a bit sad, as I am older than you!
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I didn’t know that! I would’ve thought that you…
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