There’s so much can be said in a song.
The troubled child sings an inner song.
Fat cats stuff their mouths with food and drink.
Farts and belches are their dinner song.
Remorseful mother, stressed and angry,
blesses her child, sings a sinner song.
Grand Andy stands to sing on tele;
he smugly thinks this is the winner song.
Gale force winds break branches, howling loud,
until a breeze drifts a thinner song.
Some make a long story longer still;
Yet some tell tall tales; some spin a song.
And I, with stilled pen and silent muse,
pour myself a second gin… Ah! Song!!
To hear the poem read aloud click HERE.
I loved the way you have contrived rhymes. Each couplet has something to offer in the tradition of the format. As you said, ‘there’s so much can be said in a song…’.
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Like yourself – I find it fun to fiddle with a form!
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Ah Song is a neighbour of ours in Hong Kong 😀
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Bloody hell! Bloomin’ heck! I’m lost for words – except for one, and it’s the one I’m not allowed to use…!
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Very neat, Bruce.
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Thank, Derrick.
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And Ah Song has a sister – Mai Song. When he introduces her he says “This is Mai Song” and everybody expects him to burst into a hearty rendition of the Petula Clark classic.
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There must be a Ray Song for it though…
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