The wind that broke the branch
forced it to twist and dance before
it died. And what is more,
it stripped it to the core and slashed
its leaves and bark, and bashed
it ‘til it snapped and crashed upon
the ground. Its life had gone.
Death ended all the fun the wind
enjoyed.
The young girl danced at his
command; her captor’s wish;
his power; his lust; a dish; spittoon;
his weekly afternoon
delight. She fell quite soon. He spread
her legs and shot her dead,
a bullet to the head. He’ll get
another bit of meat next time
he goes to town.
(The form of this poem is based on the Vietnamese Luc bat. The poem was “driven” by the abduction of 110 schoolgirls by Boko Haram in the Nigerian town of Dapchi).
To hear the poem read aloud click HERE.
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This is a strong poem. The images (particularly in the second stanza) are haunting.
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Thanks. I wrote it to be posted in a month or two, but then thought that by then the abducting by ISIS in Nigeria would be too old news…
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Very powerful Bruce
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Thank you, Shubha.
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The first stanza sets the base of the very disturbing lines that follow. Again, the imagery employed in the beginning emphasises the devilish power of the brute, and the helplessness of the victim. And all the time, the poem retains a lyrical roll, adding to the grisliness of the subject.
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Thanks once again,Uma. It really is quite horrid through and through – the poem I mean…
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It’s an apt commentary on the times we are stranded in. Again, your mastery on both subject and format of the poetry is total.
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That’s very kind – and also quite exciting! I think the subject and format circumstance happens by accident: one dictates the other!
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That is a rich format, uniquely gifted to set in motion deep and turbulent thoughts. That it comes from Vietnam is serendipitous.
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Yes – I agree – I think it’s a form to rival any other – and you should try it! The challenge with the rhyme is to not make it sound trite – so I find myself using “half-rhymes” to avoid it becoming too nursery-rhymie.
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A powerful pairing, Bruce
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Thanks, Derrick.
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Hello Bruce. The poem shocked me on reading it, and then I came upon your explanation – and of course that took me back to the shockingly awful news of those poor girls. A fine poem on a very difficult theme. All the best, John
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Thanks very much, John. Greatly appreciated. Regards.
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