Dale was demonstrating to his children how to best peel an orange using a knife when he accidentally cut off his finger. They phoned for an ambulance and it set out immediately only to crash into a cyclist at an intersection. The cyclist was killed. At the cyclist’s funeral, or more particularly at the cup of tea afterwards, old Mrs Clifton choked on a cucumber sandwich and was beyond revival by the time anyone performed the Heimlich manoeuvre. At Mrs Clifton’s funeral, Jack met Rachel and they fell in love and got married and Rachel was expecting but it was an ectopic pregnancy and they lost the baby, but later they had another baby who grew up to be a tyrannical man who beat up his wife and children, and one of the children was a malfunctioning individual and murdered three people, all of whom were destined to become great artists of one sort or another, but their careers were through before they had even started. The painting that one of them was destined to paint, and never did, would have been lost in an attic for decades only to be found by a destitute widow who was trying to feed her eleven children. She could’ve sold it for millions. One of her eleven children was the great-great grandchild of Dale, who was now home from hospital minus the missing finger, and was about to demonstrate to his children once again how to best peel an orange using a knife when his wife declared vehemently DON’T YOU DARE! DON’T YOU DARE!
I enjoyed this story! It beautifully illustrates the law of cause and effect. Everything happens for a reason–because something caused it to happen.
minor suggestion; I would add line breaks.
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Thanks Christopher. No line breaks sorry. It make it hard to read but removes the cause and effect that the form is trying to convey! It is short enough to allow a reading thereof.
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Yes, that’s a good point.
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This is dark humour at its best. It’s brilliant.
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Thanks, Nitin. That’s much appreciated and means a lot to me.
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It’s scary to think all the impact one thing can have. Unappealing for sure 😉
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I’m almost too scared these days to get out of bed!
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For sure
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I laughed out loud at the artist bit. Thanks for putting a smile on my face.
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Thanks, Jake! Glad it raised a smile!
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O Mama Mia! Someone needs to grab hold of Mr Wells’ Time Machine and stop Dale from peeling that orange with a knife. Even so, there could possibly be no remedial intervention of the chain reaction taking place in the realm of possibilities. You are a magical writer of dystopian fiction. The guys at Hulu should be doing a rethinking of their fixation with Margaret Atwood.
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Thanks Uma. I have read Margaret Atwood only in my future!
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And this is why I don’t eat oranges. No one ever lost a finger peeling the wrapper off a chocolate bar.
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One has to be careful with some candies however, as enthusiastic Chihuahua owners are known to have lost a finger or two – such is their enthusiasm for unwrapped sweets.
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Such a pithy
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Thanks, Derrick. A zestful comment.
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🙂
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Making up for lost time with this story. LOTS of horrible things and all wound into a nice circular story. Marvelous.
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Thanks, Noelle!
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Now I know why your characters have such challenges – it all began with story number 1 and after that it was unstoppable!
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