(The poetic form selected for this month is the ghazal, and this is the last one for the time being!)
Godwits wade, and in late summer light, take flight.
Gulls on beaches, crowds in black and white, take flight.
Old owls wake at dusk and opening wide each eye
(Stealthy phantom hunters of the night) take flight.
Nectar-feeding bellbirds in white blossom trees,
Hearing gravel footsteps near, take fright, take flight.
Raptors rip apart a captured careless hare;
Falcon, eagle, vulture, hawk and kite, take flight.
Ducks waddle in a hapless clumsy manner,
But unmindful of their shuffling plight, take flight.
Dodos without wings were stuck upon the ground;
Bruce’s blogging friends, with visions bright, take flight.
To hear the poem read aloud click HERE.
Come back soon, ghazal. I’ll miss you.
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Thanks, Yvonne. You might like the next offering – which is the Burns Stanza – the form of the “wee sleekit cow’rin tim’rous beastie”!
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I thought I knew a little bit about poetry and poetic form but that’s a new one on me. A little beauty!
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It’s new to me in the last 12 months – but those from India grew up with it!
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Beautiful Ghazal Bruce, you’re blogging friends aren’t flying anywhere….
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Thanks Shubha – they can always fly in a circle and land again!
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Yes Bruce 👍
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This one is packed with vivid innate rhymes and imagery. The symbolism of flight is powerful. The maqta is humorous to say the least and if you look around you will find another rather stolid dodo glued to the land next to you. This must not be the end of this beautiful form. You must write many more in the days to come.
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Thank, Uma. I was going to put a kiwi as being flightless, but thought the dodo might be more universally known! I shall certainly revisit the form!
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Another beauty, Bruce
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Thanks, Derrick. As you know, there are many different flowers in the garden!!!
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Nice humour at the end Bruce, I love the rhythm of the varieties of birds and the images of their natures and the way they move.
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Thanks Andrea. I’ not sure if in a ghazal (strictly speaking) every couplet should have been about birds! But… however…
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