Minnie stood at the doorway. She said farewell to her brother. It was for the last time. He was to be gone; forever. They hugged. He moved away.
He walked down the garden path and never turned back. His footfalls crunched on the path’s gravel. There were flowers on either side. Somewhere a bird sang.
He turned a corner. His footfalls faded.
Minnie heard the gate latch open.
She heard the gate click shut.
Listen the story being read HERE!
Is Minnie hallucinating? Does this mean there is hope for a return?
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No hope!
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For Minnie or your possible return?
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No possible return for either! There comes a time…!
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Well then, I know your departure point is imminent. There is also a word in our language called ‘reconsideration.’ 🙂 Until such time that you may reconsider, I wish you much peace and contentedness as you continue your life journey. With love and appreciation for you.
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Thank you so much, Eric. Much appreciated. And good luck to yourself too!
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A haunting and sublime work, Bruce. It will keep me thinking for awhile. P.S. I’ve decided not to collect anything for my first book publication. I found a jeweler who will work with me to design a unique piece of jewelry to commemorate.
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Thank you!
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Ah. I shall console myself by browsing the archive.
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It’s always fun to mess around in archives.
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There are many jewels to be found amidst the dusty archives.
I’m opting for a happy ending to your penultimate tale.
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The final story could well be a disappointment to all! (Just preparing you!)
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I just won’t read it!
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Sad, yet this moment comes to us all.
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Thank you (again!)
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So sad.Wish the gate would open again!
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Shut with the gentlest of clicks, Noelle!
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Bruce, we all know the last leaf of the book is here. You didn’t have to make it poignant.
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It is the penultimate page. Perhaps he will return… no he won’t! I thought of Tennyson’s “Break break break on thy cold grey stones O sea” – when I wrote this!
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Bruce, you will be missed! As said above, there are fortunately the archives and, as I joined you rather late on this journey, I will be diving and delving. The present may move to be past, but it will not be lost or forgotten. Like golden memories, we can recall them at our leisure and I look forward to that!
Congrats on completing your goal(s) – really great achievement – and wishing you everything good moving forward… 😊🎆🎉🙌
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Thanks, Rob. Am having internet problems with WordPress – and that’s one thing I won’t be sorry to kiss goodbye!
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Can relate with Internet issues! Just please don’t take your blog down!
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His presence has remained
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