A bird in a tree sings
the music off by heart
taught by its father
Its father before that
on stout and spikey branches
sang songs its father knew
The early morning light
seeping through trees and leaves
is inspiration
The modern bird
with no unplaced feather
introduces a wrong note
The cacophony of the times
echoes through early mornings
and gives no rest
Correct your note silly bird
and sing your father’s melodies
wrought in the time of dinosaurs
To hear the poem read aloud click HERE.
This poem can be interpreted in so many different ways, but it’s your sense of humour that shines through, just like it does in a lot of your work.
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Thank you! That is a lovely comment to make, and has made my day!
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This is so beautiful in its simplicity, and yet not simple at all. It reminds me of the poetry of William Carlos Williams, who was at the forefront in creating and using the triversen in 20th century American Poetry. A clean, clear simplicity of form belies the complexity of thought; As Nitin says above, there are many ways one can construe meaning here. One of my favorite is to say it’s a poem about itself….among other things. I really like it, Bruce.
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Thanks, Cynthia. I found online (parts of) Turco’s Handbook of Poetics that you recommended. And the William Carlos Williams triversen was the first “form” I came across- so this is my effort! So I’m thrilled you like it!
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Our birds are all singing in tune here. Thank you Bruce 🙂
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Thanks Sylvie – that’s Christchurch birds for you!
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Aw, the little fella wants to be creative…
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Get too creative and he’ll get put in a cage!
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He’d better take creative flying lessons…
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Reminiscent of Dylan Thomas! Even the gravelly voice! Nice!
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Oh! How exciting to have a gravelly voice! And to be like Dylan Thomas!
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I thought of Dylan Thomas [knowing nothing of what you and Cynthia speak – such a talented and learned pair!] I don’t know why I thought of Thomas, nor why I heard Richard Burton’s voice speak, before I listened to yours …… perhaps this poem is really for the Welsh birds? The birds here still sing in tune I think – or at least, I have not noticed any discord in their morning or evening trills…………….. I really like this poem Bruce!
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Thank you! I’m having a field day! And now a Richard Burton comparison! It’s enough to make me sing out of tune!
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Isn’t it funny how you can hear someone speaking something when they aren’t? Sometimes something lends itself to a voice. The poem does seem to come from another time, though–maybe its structure? In any event, I can see it being interpreted several ways as well. I see this little bird flying off to experiment with twelve tone music and dissonant harmonies!
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Nothing demands less of a wrong note than 12-tone music! It can’t afford to have a note out. But we shall call the bird Schoenberg nonetheless for it’s wild departure from traditional music!
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Heh heh. Glass, maybe; I think the bird’s way past Schoenberg…
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Pip! Pip! Pip! sang the bird (and for those who don’t know and will miss the “joke” – the composer’s full name is Philip Glass!) Pip! Pip! Pip!
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Shouldn’t that be Shoenbird?
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Schoenbird, Webird (Webern), and Bird (Berg). !!
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The three Birds…..a whole new version of “the three B”s”!
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I knew about the birds and the bees, but I didn’t know the was a third!
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Timeless
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Thank you!
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Now that your deviant bird has introduced a wrong note, it’s going to be carried as a dominant gene, and will soon become the right note.
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Nature has a way of weeding it out!
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You hope!
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I love the humour and the observation. Even birds need to be cautious about introducing changes to classic elements of song
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That’s true Peter – I was just saying something similar the other day to my pet canary…
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A beautiful, allegorical piece!
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Thanks – I’m trying to take some of the old poetic forms and “practise” them.
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